Saturday, June 5, 2010

Into an old lovers lane

A life encompassing a lot of loss and gain,
Met men who hurt to cause a lot of grief and pain,
Gave few reasons to smile and lot of disdain

Yet there was one with a smile insane,
Who took me away to distant lands and terrain,
And under the stars and by the balmy sea wind,
He would sing an old lovers song again and again...

The song that I now sing with the city's new rain,
A mind that wanders into an old lovers lane...

10 comments:

  1. My lady, how do u manage to write such thoughtful lines? Just how??

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  2. Ever wondered if the converse holds true? As in, perhaps you may have "hurt (someone) to cause a lot of grief and pain, Gave few reasons to smile and lot of disdain"?

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  4. Hi...here from Indivine...
    Thats a nice post...

    A mind that wanders into an old lovers lane...

    I loved these lines...gives a familiar feeling.
    Good goin gurl!!

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  5. @ Anonymous: Well just consider it a wandering minds thoughts :)

    @ Anonymity: Sir/ Mam, if you are asking in terms of love then I am sure I have hurt none. So yeah the answer is never. So the question to 'wonder' simply doesnt arise.

    @Indli: Yeah shall check out.

    @ Songofsea : Thanks.

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  6. I can understand every letter over here, for you it's a 'he' and for me a it's a 'she' ! :)

    Loved this !

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  7. Lovely lines Archna:)

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  8. @Archana : Beautiful !!! Adorable !!! I enjoyed the rhyme scheme the most !! A deja vu of the classes held in my Alma Mater !! :)

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